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Chapter 1: The Idea

Thelma & Louise is a rare instance of a screenwriter, and a first-timer no less, setting out to make a heartfelt social statement and largely succeeding. In the end, Callie Khouri saw manifested on screen a clear representation of her belief that women in this world must live under a soul-crippling double standard. Director Ridley Scott and lead actors Susan Sarandon and Geena Davis certainly did great justice to her script. But the indelible power of Thelma & Louise comes not from its director, actors or production team.

It comes from a key choice Khouri made right at the beginning of the story:

We are so outraged at Harlan – first for brutalizing Thelma and then for his cavalier inference that Louise wouldn’t have dared use the gun anyway – we’re not particularly sorry to see him get shot. But, in our outrage, we overlook a key factor in the incident:

Louise’s practical choice is also Khouri’s creative choice, one that sets up a discussion of gender politics that hovers over the rest of the story:

Let’s just assume for a moment that the answer to these questions is, at least to some degree, yes. Then . . .

Khouri’s choice to have Thelma free from danger when Louise kills Harlan takes us beyond the simple justice of self-defense and into an uncertain moral ground where we must grapple with the more complex issue of how much abuse one individual can be expected to tolerate before they strike back. As if Khouri is saying, “Sometimes I get so angry, I just want to shoot somebody!”

Callie Khouri is an avowed feminist. So the thematic aspect of this film was not accidental. But she is also an artist, which tells us her choices were not always entirely conscious, either.

The Artist

One day an image popped into her head of “two women on a crime spree,”1 which is how things work with artists.

The Feminist

Then the feminist in her said, “I like that!” because it challenges conventional notions of what women can and should do.

She toiled with this idea for a while, going down some dead end paths (“Maybe Louise works at a big oil company in one of those giant buildings . . .”)2, until she had an encounter with a lecherous old man3 that provoked a spontaneous urge to shoot him and – Bingo! – there’s her triggering event for the crime spree.

By having Louise shoot Harlan, Khouri found a perfect outlet for her impulse towards the old man, giving her a much better revenge than actually shooting him in the face. If she had actually shot him in the face, she would have been vilified. Her story says this, too: Men are allowed to act out all their base impulses towards women, whether verbally or physically, with little to no accountability. But if a woman assaults a man, she is a threat.

Whereas Louise has to use a gun to get her point across, Khouri expresses herself in a language that men will hear – cars, guns, sex, violence and the chase. Thus, she created an action-packed, tension-filled romp that is also a thematically rich metaphor.

To be sure, there is a degree to which Thelma and Louise are stock characters. Thelma is the oppressed housewife and Louise is the independent single woman who can’t get a man to commit. But they also have their distinct personalities. Thelma is slightly nutty, while Louise is compulsively organized and a little bossy. Plus, they each have a growth edge. On their way out of town, Louise sums up the challenge they both face:

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Louise is trying to break out of settling for a boyfriend who is physically and emotionally absent a good deal of the time, while Thelma is trying to get a break from a stultifying marriage and have some fun. She makes this clear when they stop at the roadhouse and she orders a Wild Turkey:

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There is, however, yet another level on which these characters function, where they embody the larger meaning of the story.

Louise is the one who already has the knowledge of how dangerous men can be, as well as the limits of what women can do to protect themselves. Thus, she embodies female rage at having to live in a sexually and economically oppressive society. She expresses that rage by killing a man who insults her, and taking off for Mexico instead of turning herself in.

Thelma, on the other hand, embodies female denial, the segment of women who can’t acknowledge the oppression they live with because it’s too painful. So Thelma is asleep, the powerless housewife who has simply adapted. This story is about her process of waking up, to finally access her own rage.

Since Louise’s act of shooting Harlan is the “trigger,” so to speak, for a plot about two women on the lam, you could say the story is “driven” by Louise. Technically, she is the one who the authorities are after. Thus, she provides the focus for the external story of escape and pursuit.

However, Thelma, meanwhile, is undergoing a radical awakening. Although at first she may seem the more passive of the two, she travels an emotional and psychological distance that far outstrips the miles clocked on Louise’s odometer. By the end, she is seeing the world entirely anew.

Together, these two characters give the film an easily recognizable, action-packed plot that runs in parallel with a more subtle yet profound character transformation. (For more on A to B story progression, click here.)

The Plot Progression:

Louise gives in to a latent aggressive impulse and shoots a man for sexually insulting her.

 

After a long chase, she is backed up against a cliff and decides she's not giving up.

The Character Progression:

Thelma enters as a de­pen­dent, submissive house­wife, chaffing under her husband’s control and cra­ving a little fun in her life.

 

She makes her final exit as an empowered, self-directed woman, no longer willing to submit to paternalistic forces.

Thus, the impact of this film does not come from its action story alone. Of equal importance is Thelma’s internal journey toward self-empowerment, creating a second structure, complementary to the plot, in which the character transitions have their own function while operating in concert with the plot transitions.

However, what makes this film rise above so many others is its thematic through-line, which puts forth the idea that male-dominated society is unable to tolerate women who fight back against abusive men. The story progresses from a mundane truth to a newly revealed Truth in which we see how the world, or our understanding of the world, has changed. Any great film will have more layers than superficial plot. The beauty of this film is in how seamlessly its character and plot progressions weave together to reveal a thematic meaning.

The Theme Progression:

A woman can gain power with a neglectful man in her life by going away without telling him.

 

Women who take aggressive action against abusive men cannot survive in this world.

Being a road film, Thelma & Louise is very linear, giving it an easily identifiable structure and making it an especially useful teaching tool for beginners. But, its real value is found under the surface, in its well-developed layers of character and theme, which also provide a highly rewarding study for the advanced learner. To strike a balance between the two, the following structural analysis assumes the reader has a basic familiarity with traditional three-act structure. Click here if you could use a quick refresher.

Chapter 2: The First Act

I always like to start an analysis with the opening image to see what major story themes can be found there. In the case of Thelma & Louise, it is an image from the film’s ending. It starts in black-and-white and then turns into color, suggesting a dull, drab existence that comes to life. It shows us the open road, suggesting freedom, and a natural, almost spiritual, beauty.

We are being shown where we will end up, literally. But we are also being shown an unworldly, transcendent place. Khouri was very clear that, when Thelma and Louise go over the cliff, it was not her intention that they were committing suicide, as some have accused her. Rather, they are going to a spiritual freedom that, for Khouri, is the only kind of freedom available to these women.4 This image is giving us an encapsulated foreshadowing of that at the outset of the film’s First Act.

Then, from this soaringly awe-inspiring place, we are brought crashing down to an earthbound opening scene in a crowded, noisy, claustrophobic diner. Here we are introduced to Louise:

When looking to uncover a film’s story structure, among the first questions to ask is, “whose story is it?” The implication is that it must be one person’s story. There are certainly exceptions to this, but this film is not one of them. Thelma & Louise is Thelma’s story.

When I tell students this in class, someone invariably protests that it is both their stories because Louise is just as important as Thelma. So I have to explain that this is not a value judgment favoring Thelma. I am not taking anything away from Louise. It is a purely pragmatic way of identifying which character the story’s structure is built on.

In determining the answer to the question of whose story it is, another question must be asked: “Who is the sympathetic character?” At the beginning of a story, the viewer needs to be given a way to enter into it. The most common way this is done is through attachment to a main character, and the easiest way to create that attachment is by showing that character at a power disadvantage. This is what creates the sympathetic character, which, in turn, determines whose story is being told.

So we need to look at who, of Thelma and Louise, is introduced at a power disadvantage. So far, we have seen Louise chastise a young woman about smoking and then chastise Thelma for not asking her husband yet if she can go away for the weekend. Neither of these is showing her at a power disadvantage.

What, then, do we see when we are introduced to Thelma?

There are several elements in this scene designed to show Thelma in an unfulfilling marriage with a guy who is a buffoon.

She’s trying to be nice:

Thelma calls Louise back to say she’s going, and then we get a packing-for-the-trip montage that gives a little more insight into each of their characters.

Louise packs very neatly, her things all organized in plastic bags . . .

Planting the gun could have been accomplished by having it belong to Louise, . . .

. . . in which case we would have seen Louise packing it.

This choice would have taken Louise’s savvy, cynical nature and tipped it toward something considerably more aggressive. What’s nice in Khouri’s choice is how it uses the technical business of planting the gun to further delineate Thelma’s character. In Thelma’s hands, the gun is more innocent. She brings it because she is not used to going places without a man and she feels vulnerable. We learn later that Darryl bought her the gun for protection when he is not home at night. But the efficacy of this plan is brought into question when we see how Thelma handles it. The screenplay reads:

So while we see that Thelma has a gun, we also deduce that she doesn’t know how to use it, which is a little unnerving.

Ultimately, though, Khouri has to get the gun into Louise’s purse, so she has Thelma ask Louise what to do with it, reaffirming her helplessness:

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Louise readily takes charge:

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Khouri now has the gun where she needs it and we feel better since we would rather have it in Louise’s purse than in Thelma’s inexperienced hands.

PLOT 

CHARACTER 

 Setup 

                                

                                

Louise plans a weekend awayThelma goes with her

Thus, we have completed the Setup, the opening sequence that takes up the first half of the first act, as indicated on this structure timeline. (Click on each chart point for explanatory text.)

Chapter 3: The Point of Attack

Thelma’s blissful slumber is given its first jolt when she is confronted with a brutal reality in Harlan’s attempt to rape her. Louise then kills him and we have arrived at the first structural marker, which I call the Point of Attack.

Thelma & Louise is not a film about two women on a weekend jaunt to a cabin in the mountains. Rather, it is about what happens when a woman confronted with sexual violence topped by sexual insult expresses her anger to its most extreme degree. That story begins with Harlan’s attempted rape of Thelma and Louise’s subsequent murder of him. Thus, these events, together, qualify as the Point of Attack.

To support the powerful effect of this Point of Attack, a steady increase in tension leads up to it:

This example is a generic story. It could happen to anyone. Good drama is when a specific character is challenged in a very individual way.

Thelma lives her life under the assumption that men are necessary and, in fact, indispensable as protectors from the world’s dangers:

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She cannot conceive of having to protect herself from these unseen threats. So she must stay in a state of denial about the compromises she makes in order to have the protection of men. Then she experiences one of these “protectors” violently assaulting her, which poses a grave challenge to her bedrock assumptions. The threats are not as removed as she had thought. Even a man who represents himself as “safe” can be dangerous and do great damage. Over the course of the story, she will have to find a way to integrate this new information into her worldview and come out with a new set of assumptions.

PLOT 

CHARACTER 

 Setup 

                                

                                

 Point of Attack 

Thelma goes with herLouise plans a weekend awayLouise murders HarlanHarlan tries to rape Thelma

Chapter 4: The End of the First Act

I am continually surprised, with each new film I analyze, at the consistency with which the First Act comes to a close. As I search for an event around twenty-five to thirty minutes into the film that launches the Second Act, suddenly, there it is again: a decision on the part of the main character. I won’t say always, but I will say that often, most often, very, very often, in fact, almost all the time, I will find a moment where the main character either makes a decision or chooses a course of action that then provides the focus for the second act. This film is no different.

After the attempted rape and murder, Thelma and Louise speed away from the scene of the crime. Thelma wants to go to the police, but Louise says no one will believe it was rape because they saw her dancing with him. They stop at a coffee shop and fight over what to do. Then they get a hotel room and bicker some more. Finally, Louise sends Thelma out to the pool so she can think.

Now we are on our way to the End of the First Act, which is Thelma’s decision to join Louise in her escape to Mexico. This defines the “task” of the Second Act: to get to Mexico.

But of greater importance for the story’s structure is the fact that Thelma’s decision to go to Mexico is a significant moment in her progression toward independence and self-determination. This is the progression that began with her decision to go away for the weekend without “asking” her husband. The next point on the way was when Thelma pleaded with Louise to stop at the roadhouse. She wants to break out of her normal routine.

But this new decision – to go to Mexico – represents a critical juncture because it’s a decision she doesn’t have to make. Louise is the one who killed the guy. Thelma could just say, “This is your problem, Louise. I’m out of here,” and take the next bus back to Little Rock. Instead, she’s deciding to make herself an accomplice.

However, it is also important to note that Louise’s decision to go to Mexico comes before Thelma’s. This may seem rather fundamental. But one of the most helpful tools in analyzing story structure is not to take anything for granted. A useful technique for understanding how a given element is functioning is to imagine the story without that element, or with it rearranged.

For example, what if the scene were to go like this:

Thelma: “You know, Louise, I’ve been thinking and I can’t see any other option for us but to go to Mexico.”

How does that change the story? For starters, it makes Thelma way too proactive at this point. Her character is not there yet. But more to the point, you want to be presenting events in the story in the order of their increasing intensity. Because it’s more expected, Louise’s decision to go to Mexico is lower intensity than Thelma’s. Louise is the one in trouble. Plus, she’s not the type to just sit around, and she’s certainly not interested in being a victim. She has to do something or they will surely catch up with her.

But for Thelma, this decision represents a much bigger stretch of her emotional and psychological being. She has barely ever been out of Little Rock. Nor is she accustomed to making big decisions on her own. This gives Thelma’s decision a greater intensity as a dramatic event and is why you want it to come second, after Louise’s.

Given that these decisions must be made separately and in a certain order, Khouri uses a very nice sequence of cause-and-effect relationships between scenes to accomplish it.

Here is the first cause and effect in the sequence:

PLOT 

CHARACTER 

 Setup 

                                

 Point of Attack 

    End of 1st Act    

Thelma goes with herLouise plans a weekend awayLouise murders HarlanHarlan tries to rape ThelmaJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go to Mexico

However, as pointed out earlier, Louise’s decision is the easier one to make: she’s is in trouble with the law, she’s not married and she has this loser boyfriend. She is clear now about what she’s going to do, but she needs to know what Thelma will do. So she asks her:

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But Thelma doesn’t know.

Then we see another cause and effect:

PLOT 

CHARACTER 

 Setup 

                                

 Point of Attack 

    End of 1st Act    

Thelma goes with herLouise plans a weekend awayLouise murders HarlanHarlan tries to rape ThelmaLouise decides to go to MexicoJimmy hesitatesDarryl threatensThelma decides to go to Mexico

This sequence of scenes, then, adds up to a nice clean cause and effect progression:

Jimmy is a noncommittal slouch . . .

Chapter 5: The First Half of the
Second Act

One thing that fascinates me is how often when studying a film that appears to have a seamless and organic flow on screen, I will stumble upon distinct underlying structural patterns that are almost mathematical in nature. The cause-and-effect progression just described is one such example. Another is the appearance in this film of two separate parallel action sequences in the first half of the second act.

First is a traditional tension-building parallel action, with Hal beginning his investigation while Louise and Thelma head to Mexico:

Scenes of Hal:

searching Louise’s apartment,

In Oklahoma City, Louise finds Jimmy waiting for her with the money. J.D. is sent packing and Louise gives the $6700 to Thelma
for safekeeping. This begins the second use of parallel action, a very compact sequence of three scenes each.

Notice here the use of the aesthetically sound number three – giving each little story a beginning, a middle and an end – with the ultimate effect of contrasting two types of relationship: one, a substantive discussion between two people seeking emotional resolution: the other, a wild ride of flirtation, seduction and consummation. Louise’s relationship is internal and emotional. Thelma’s is pure rollicking fun.

The nice thing about Jimmy, in character terms, is that while he does have more of a soul than the other male characters (he is a musician, after all) he is, nonetheless, capable of losing his temper and turning over a table. Even Jimmy, who Louise loves, can be violent. But, interestingly, this particular choice does not appear to come from Khouri. In the script, all it says is this:

So someone else (my guess would be the actor, Michael Madsen) said, “Let’s be real here. Let’s have him turn over a table.”

The idea of men as abusers of power is consistently shown in Thelma’s experience, as well:

Darryl is so overcontrolling . . .

Nonetheless, Thelma’s first experience with good sex has a transformative effect on her. In the same way that J.D.’s tutelage on how to conduct a proper robbery unleashes Thelma’s inner bandit, her romp-in-the-sack with him unleashes a sexual appetite she never knew she had. The effect is liberating, but it is also empowering, as we see when they discover J.D. has stolen their money and Thelma swings into action. It is no accident that, in this story of female liberation, Thelma’s gradual social awakening pivots on a sexual awakening.

Indeed, Khouri is careful to portray female sexuality as vibrant and powerful. In the motel diner, first Louise has such a passionate good-bye kiss with Jimmy that the waitress jokes she thought she’d have to put out a fire. When Thelma dreamily saunters in with a serious case of bedhead that prompts Louise to ask what’s wrong with her, Thelma’s response – “Do I seem different?” – tells us that she feels different. Then she makes a poignant admission:

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The implication is that domestic oppression and sexual unfulfillment go hand in hand. Louise then welcomes Thelma into a different kind of sisterhood:

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Despite knowing the realities of rape, these women still want to have sex with men, not as passive objects or victims of aggression, but in a mutually enjoyable way, as sexual equals, with their own desires being respected. In this way, Khouri’s depictions of sex are an expression of hope for relations between women and men.

Chapter 6: The Midpoint

All of which brings us to the Midpoint, one of the most interesting structural markers and, potentially, the most helpful. When you chart out a well-structured drama on a timeline, you see a cluster of activity at the beginning that is designed to get us invested in the characters, get oriented to what’s going on and understand what’s at stake.

Then at the end, there is another bunch of activity designed to resolve the story, provide a sense that something has happened and give an idea of where the characters will go from here.

I like to think of the beginning and the end as being like the takeoff and landing on a cross-country flight. There are very concrete tasks that must be done in order to get the thing off the ground and then to smoothly bring it down again. But then there’s that loooooonnnnnggggg stretch in the middle when you’re pretty much on your own.

To be sure, there is much opportunity for creativity in the second act, since you’re not so concerned with all those takeoff and landing tasks. But the challenge is in how to organize it. This is the source of that oft-heard lament among screenwriters, “My second act is killing me!” Well, there is good news. While air travelers must simply endure, screenwriters can gain the help of a very useful guidepost if they develop an understanding of how the Midpoint functions.

The standard, plot-based view of the Midpoint is that it is the first culmination of the second act, where there is an initial attempt to solve the problem that either partially succeeds or fails. This is highly effective for the action-driven story. But a character story needs to go a little deeper. So what you will typically find in a character-centered Midpoint is a nearly cataclysmic external event that causes an internal shift in the main character.

Where do we find a nearly cataclysmic event in Thelma & Louise? That’s easy:

This leap marks Thelma’s internal shift. But let’s look a little more closely at how it works. A character transformation is essentially an A to B progression. In Thelma’s case, at point A she is a submissive, dependent housewife, but when she eventually lands at point B, she is an empowered, self-directed woman. Khouri’s task is to get her to that B in a convincing way, which means in small increments over time.

Let’s say at point A your main character embodies zero percent of B, while at point B, obviously, he or she is at 100%. Now, we’ve all seen movies where the character’s internal progression looks like this:

In other words, the main character stumbles through the story, making a mess of things, until, well into the third act, when he or she suddenly undergoes a miraculous change, and we’re supposed to believe that henceforth that character will be a new person. The problem here is we all know in real life, generally speaking, people don’t experience sudden radical change. This is why such abrupt transformation in a movie is so unconvincing. To avoid this pitfall, you need to make sure that by one-quarter of the way through the film your character is at about 25% of who he or she will become at the end, by halfway through he or she is at 50%, and so on.

0%

50%

100%

Looking at Thelma, indeed, when she leaves for the weekend without asking permission, she’s at about 5% of becoming an empowered, self-directed woman.

5%

Thelma leaves without permission

Thelma has had a bitter lesson about putting blind trust in men, such that from this point on, we don’t see her making those mistakes anymore. Her subsequent encounters with men show a different power balance:

First, having seen J.D.’s demonstration of how to stage a holdup . . .

This Midpoint shift, then, becomes a helpful marker for organizing the story events. Let’s say, for example, that when Khouri came up with the scene of Thelma taking the cop hostage, she liked it so much she put it very early in the story.

But she couldn’t get it to work there. It just didn’t feel right. By identifying the Midpoint as the marker before which Thelma is a follower and after which she begins taking charge, Khouri could take a step back and say, “It doesn’t make sense for Thelma to be so bold this early. This scene should go after the Midpoint when she’s starting to take charge. Phew! That’s better.”

However, there is a distinction worth noting here: Don’t mistake the crossing of this 50% mark as making the ending inevitable. If it were inevitable, the story would be over. The writer must still continue to progress the character’s internal growth in small incremental changes. What the 50% mark does is make the ending possible.

PLOT 

CHARACTER 

 Setup 

                                

 Point of Attack 

    End of 1st Act    

        Midpoint        

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

Thelma goes with herLouise plans a weekend awayLouise murders HarlanHarlan tries to rape ThelmaLouise decides to go to MexicoJimmy hesitatesDarryl threatensThelma decides to go to MexicoLouise gets $6700 from JimmyJ.D. steals Louise’s $6700Thelma promises to make up for it

Chapter 7: The Second Half of the
Second Act

Now we are into the second half of the story where stakes are raised and tension is increased at every opportunity. Whereas up until now we have seen Hal, the police detective, working solo, now he is surrounded by FBI men. Whereas Thelma has been a dead weight carried by Louise, now she is becoming an effective “partner-in-crime,” thinking on her feet and not afraid to take risks. Louise has barely a moment to wallow in her misery before Thelma comes running out of a roadside store yelling at her to “Drive!” as she hops in the car and waves a bunch of bills just raided from the cash register. This launches another cause-and-effect progression that builds in momentum toward the End of the Second Act.

But first, a side note about the surveillance-tape scene . . .

The device of cutting to the surveillance tape playing in the police station has the obvious benefit of immediately showing the shocked reaction of Darryl and the cops:

But let’s not overlook that it is, in fact, a flashforward in an otherwise linear timeframe. They have had time to get the tape, figure out that it’s Thelma and bring Darryl into the station. But it’s also a flashback because we’re seeing what previously happened. A flashback and flashforward and the viewer is not completely confused? This scene actually illustrates a crucial point about how to motivate a time jump by bringing up a question in the viewer’s mind, as Louise does after Thelma reveals that she has robbed the store:

Louise is articulating what the viewer is thinking: “Wait a minute, you just skipped over a whole thing back there about what Thelma did when she went into that store. I want to see that!” So the film obliges by going back and picking up that scene, on the surveillance tape, giving us the opportunity to also see the shocked reactions of the men in the police station. And the reason we are not completely jolted out of the story in a state of extreme temporal disorientation is because the question being answered by it – What did she do in there? – is so imperative, we don’t care about picky little details of chronological time. Then, having sufficiently answered that question, we can cut back to the two women charging down the road, mere moments after the holdup, whooping and hollering.

Now, back to the cause-and-effect progression.

Thelma’s robbery has pulled Louise out of her funk and soon she is bossing Thelma around again. Meanwhile, J.D. has been picked up with $6600 in his pocket, which Hal has connected to the $6700 Jimmy gave Louise.

Louise tells Thelma to call Darryl, and if he sounds different in any way, to hang up because that means his phone is tapped:

Here’s where we see the cause and effect:

First, Thelma discovers she is responsible for losing the money . . .

. . . when they’re stopped for speeding, she makes up for it:

Louise, meanwhile, is playing a little cat-and-mouse game with Hal, calling to talk to him and then calling him back. The plot justification for this is that she’s trying to get information out of him. Ostensibly, she wants to find out what the police know. But she also knows they can trace her if she stays on too long. Why would she take this risk? She is usually so strategic and levelheaded.

Whatever the plot justification, the actual reason is that it’s more interesting that way. Louise’s phone calls to Hal are a dramatic device to create a connection between them and keep it going. Plus, Hal brings new information into the plot, such as that the police know they’re on their way to Mexico and that they’ve been charged with murder.

Then the question becomes, why do we accept it? Why do we stay in the story instead of being distracted by a voice in our head saying, “That doesn’t make sense!” The answer is because we like seeing her play with Hal. She makes contact and he tries to bond with her while she keeps a calculated distance. Interaction between characters is always more interesting than having them go along on parallel tracks independent of each other. It’s fun to see them banter.

Interwoven with all this cat-and-mouse activity between Louise and Hal, and Thelma’s process of discovering her wild side, is a series of dialogue scenes that bring back to the foreground the discussion of gender politics. By being reminded of the exploitation, insult and abuse women must endure without recourse, we are being prepared for the descent toward these characters’ tragic demise. The discussion begins soon after the store robbery when Louise tells Thelma that Darryl’s phone might be tapped:

In other words, the system is stacked against them.

A few scenes later, Thelma has an inappropriate response and Louise calls her on it:

For all their swaggering glee, these women also know the gravity of what they’ve done. Vengeance may have its thrills, but the truth is a man is dead. In an ideal world, he wouldn’t have been allowed to behave that way. And they wouldn’t have killed him.

Then Thelma asks the $64,000 question:

This is the magnitude of the trauma that women who have been raped must live with. Louise can’t even talk about it with her very best friend.

Then, after Thelma takes the cop hostage, Louise has a moment of doubt:

Louise, who is usually up, is down. But Thelma counterbalances by repeating Louise’s words back to her, thereby returning us to the triggering event and reiterating the debate: is it justifiable for women to respond to male aggression with aggression of their own?

Now we get Thelma’s perspective:

With this statement, Thelma takes on the murder once and for all:

First, she was a victim prompting Louise to commit a crime, . . .

PLOT 

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

CHARACTER 

THEME 

Setup

Point of Attack

End of 1st Act

Midpoint

Louise plans a
weekend away
Louise murders HarlanJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go
to Mexico
Louise gets $6700
from Jimmy
J.D. steals Louise’s
$6700
Thelma goes
with her
Harlan tries to rape
Thelma
Darryl threatensThelma decides to go
to Mexico
Thelma promises
to make up for it

In this series of scenes that returns us to the discussion of gender politics, we begin to see the theme progression operating in parallel with the plot and character progressions:

They can’t plead self-defenseA man is dead/Louise was rapedLouise regrets/Thelma no regretsThelma takes a
cop hostage
Thelma robs a store

Chapter 8: The End of the Second Act

In a plot-based structure, the End of the Second Act is the point when things become just about as bad as they can be. Then, at the Climax, they get worse, stretching the tension to the highest possible intensity before the big release that provides a resolution.

But in a character-based story, a release of tension is not the only thing we’re going for. We’re also working toward an internal transformation. Thus, in character-based structure, the difference between these two structural points is that at the End of the Second Act there is a statement of transformation and at the Climax there is a test.

So, while life circumstances, such as the possibility of losing a friend, might motivate a person to declare an intention to change, the transformation is not complete until that statement has been put to a test. And a viewer watching a film, on some deep level, knows this. If there is no test manifested in taking action, he or she won’t buy that the main character has truly transformed. The viewer may not be able to articulate what was missing, since it is an unconscious knowledge, but at the water cooler at work the next day, he or she will give the film a thumbs-down. And you don’t want that.

Conveniently, these “statement” and “test” character functions fit nicely with the plot functions. In order to motivate the statement “I’ve changed!” at the End of the Second Act, things, indeed, have to be about as bad as they can be. Then, for the Climax to present an effective test, things will surely be worse.

One of my fascinations with this work is, having laid out a generic model, then looking for how the artful films apply these principles in a distinctive manner.

Indeed, Thelma & Louise presents its own variation on the statement of transformation and the test:

PLOT 

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

CHARACTER 

THEME 

Setup

Point of Attack

End of 1st Act

Midpoint

Louise plans a
weekend away
Louise murders HarlanJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go
to Mexico
Louise gets $6700
from Jimmy
J.D. steals Louise’s
$6700
Thelma goes
with her
Harlan tries to rape
Thelma
Darryl threatensThelma decides to go
to Mexico
Thelma promises
to make up for it
Thelma robs a storeThelma takes a
cop hostage
They can’t plead self-defenseA man is dead/Louise was rapedLouise regrets/Thelma no regrets

End of 2nd Act

They are charged with murder

Notice how effectively Thelma’s one little action of hanging up the phone serves to completely change the direction of the scene. In fact, it functions on both literal and metaphorical levels. Thelma is stopping Louise from further discussions with the police, but she’s also cutting their connection to the world they left behind. This is another proactive moment for Thelma in relation to men, akin to holding up the store and taking the cop hostage. It is an action through which Thelma makes her statement before she even articulates it.

This way, when she does articulate her transformation, it doesn’t come out sounding preachy or “on the nose.” It is simply a sincere and heartfelt statement:

PLOT 

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

CHARACTER 

THEME 

Setup

Point of Attack

End of 1st Act

Midpoint

Louise plans a
weekend away
Louise murders HarlanJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go
to Mexico
Louise gets $6700
from Jimmy
J.D. steals Louise’s
$6700
Thelma goes
with her
Harlan tries to rape
Thelma
Darryl threatensThelma decides to go
to Mexico
Thelma promises
to make up for it
Thelma robs a storeThelma takes a
cop hostage
They can’t plead self-defenseA man is dead/Louise was rapedLouise regrets/Thelma no regrets

End of 2nd Act

They are charged with murderThelma: “I can’t go back.”

This is Thelma’s statement of transformation and, therefore, the End of the Second Act. It is the moment that makes us feel we have arrived at a different place from where we started, that we have progressed from A to B. But it is also where we see undeniably that, although on the surface Thelma & Louise may appear to be a “buddy film,” for our purposes of structural analysis it is Thelma’s story. Not only is she made sympathetic at the beginning, she is also the one who transforms in the end. Although it is Louise’s extreme act that launches the plot, when looking at the character progression, Louise doesn’t go that far.

When the story opens, Louise is savvy, tough, in control and traumatized by her past rape. As it approaches its resolution, she is savvy, tough, in control and still traumatized by her past rape. Not much distance has been traveled.

Thelma, on the other hand, goes a considerable distance, from sheltered, dependent housewife to aware, empowered, self-directed woman.

It is Thelma’s decisions, actions and, ultimately, her transformation that the story’s structure is centered around.

Chapter 9: The Third Act

A common, and perhaps necessary, technique in transitioning out of one act and into the next, such as from the Second Act to the Third Act, is to follow the peak of intensity that generally comes with an act’s ending with a scene of calm and reflection that will provide a dynamic shift.

Back on the road, Thelma asks Louise if she is awake:

Even though she has been on the road for so many hours that her eyes have become narrow slits, Thelma feels more awake than ever. The sleeping housewife has arisen. Now she’s rubbing her eyes and looking around. Louise responds with a fantasy about their future life in Mexico:

This is a typical moment for a tragedy. The drama is building on its way to the ultimate demise of the main character. Then, just before it reaches its peak, a positive event will occur, in part to give us some relief — We have hope! We will prevail after all! – but also to increase the tension. When the hopeful moment has passed, the main character has further to fall.

In this story, there is no opportunity for a positive event. It wouldn’t work, for example, to have them stumble onto some money, and we sure don’t want them to encounter a helpful man. To keep the metaphor pure, they have to be fleeing in isolation, with no help and few options. So instead they go into a hopeful fantasy of what life will be like in Mexico, drinking margaritas, living in a hacienda and working at Club Med, which, of course, means having lots of great sex.

PLOT 

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

CHARACTER 

THEME 

Setup

Point of Attack

End of 1st Act

Midpoint

Louise plans a
weekend away
Louise murders HarlanJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go
to Mexico
Louise gets $6700
from Jimmy
J.D. steals Louise’s
$6700
Thelma goes
with her
Harlan tries to rape
Thelma
Darryl threatensThelma decides to go
to Mexico
Thelma promises
to make up for it
Thelma robs a storeThelma takes a
cop hostage
They can’t plead self-defenseA man is dead/Louise was rapedLouise regrets/Thelma no regrets

End of 2nd Act

They are charged with murderThelma: “I can’t go back.”Thelma feels awake

At the same time, however, there have also been numerous preparations for the fact that they will die – small, barely noticeable plants serving to embed somewhere in the viewer’s mind the possibility that things might not turn out all right:

Chapter 10: The Climax

Before Thelma and Louise go down completely, they have a point to make. Given that, as they acknowledged earlier, they have no legal recourse for the attempted rape and neither is murder a desired recourse, what, in an ideal world, do these women really want to see happen? This is the thematic discussion that was launched with Louise’s act of killing Harlan, and it now needs to be further articulated and brought to its conclusion. That’s done in yet another dialogue scene, this one mixed in with a little action and using the truck driver as a foil.

They first encounter the truck driver not long after Thelma holds up the store. As they prepare to pass his rig, they express the kind of respect that is generally afforded truckers in their status as kings of the road:

PLOT 

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

CHARACTER 

THEME 

Setup

Point of Attack

End of 1st Act

Midpoint

Louise plans a
weekend away
Louise murders HarlanJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go
to Mexico
Louise gets $6700
from Jimmy
J.D. steals Louise’s
$6700
Thelma goes
with her
Harlan tries to rape
Thelma
Darryl threatensThelma decides to go
to Mexico
Thelma promises
to make up for it
Thelma robs a storeThelma takes a
cop hostage
They can’t plead self-defenseA man is dead/Louise was rapedLouise regrets/Thelma no regrets

End of 2nd Act

They are charged with murderThelma: “I can’t go back.”Thelma feels awakeLewd trucker encounter #1

A few scenes later, they pass the truck driver again. Louise tells Thelma to just ignore him:

PLOT 

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

CHARACTER 

THEME 

Setup

Point of Attack

End of 1st Act

Midpoint

Louise plans a
weekend away
Louise murders HarlanJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go
to Mexico
Louise gets $6700
from Jimmy
J.D. steals Louise’s
$6700
Thelma goes
with her
Harlan tries to rape
Thelma
Darryl threatensThelma decides to go
to Mexico
Thelma promises
to make up for it
Thelma robs a storeThelma takes a
cop hostage
They can’t plead self-defenseA man is dead/Louise was rapedLouise regrets/Thelma no regrets

End of 2nd Act

They are charged with murderThelma: “I can’t go back.”Thelma feels awakeLewd trucker encounter #1Lewd trucker encounter #2

Now we are at the third encounter, and this time they invite him to pull over. So begins a confrontation scene that is also a didactic discussion on the impact of sexual insult:

Their first effort is simply to raise awareness, but it has no observable effect. Taking another tact, they mirror his actions back to him, demonstrating how women perceive them:

Indeed, this is what it means to women. Not that it seems to matter to these men how unattractive they appear when they do it.

Then Thelma gets to the point:

Oops! Now he’s in trouble! He’s just been placed at the scene with ole Harlan:


















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Guilty by association.

But these women are not out for blood. In fact, they’re not even vengeful. They don’t want to abuse, hurt, maim, torture, disfigure or kill this guy. They’re far above all that. They just want one thing. . . .

They want an apology.

PLOT 

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

CHARACTER 

THEME 

Setup

Point of Attack

End of 1st Act

Midpoint

Louise plans a
weekend away
Louise murders HarlanJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go
to Mexico
Louise gets $6700
from Jimmy
J.D. steals Louise’s
$6700
Thelma goes
with her
Harlan tries to rape
Thelma
Darryl threatensThelma decides to go
to Mexico
Thelma promises
to make up for it
Thelma robs a storeThelma takes a
cop hostage
They can’t plead self-defenseA man is dead/Louise was rapedLouise regrets/Thelma no regrets

End of 2nd Act

They are charged with murderThelma: “I can’t go back.”Thelma feels awakeLewd trucker encounter #1Lewd trucker encounter #2

Climax

Louise blows up the truckLewd trucker encounter #3

This is the movie’s Climax for several reasons, a lesser one being that this is an action film and we expect, in an action film, to see something blow up. Plus, the two previous scenes — something’s-crossed-over-in-me and I-feel-awake — are very internal and sensitive, adding to our need for something big and external to happen. Although this is not what makes it the structural climax, the dynamic peak and tension release certainly make it climactic.

Structurally, a climax must be more than just dynamically climactic. In a plot structure, the Climax is the point at which things get decidedly worse, after the End of the Second Act, when things have seemingly become as bad as they can be. Indeed, when Thelma hangs up the phone, Hal has just told Louise he is charging her with murder, which certainly counts among the worst things that can befall a person. Then they blow up a truck. Why not? They’re already charged with murder. What’s to lose? But it is this act of gratuitous violence that brings out the army of police cars and helicopters that chases them all the way to the edge of the Grand Canyon. The stakes have been ratcheted up considerably and things have, in fact, gone from bad to worse.

For the scene with the trucker to qualify as the Climax in the character structure, it must provide the test for the statement of transformation. Thelma’s statement is, “Something’s crossed over in me, I can’t go back,” and the act of blowing up the truck then manifests that sentiment in action.

Before this point, they were being given the benefit of the doubt, at least by Hal. He knows what happened to Louise in Texas and he knows Thelma would not have held up the store if J.D. had not stolen their money. Thus far, he has been able to temper the wrath of the law-enforcement machine. But this latest event presents a whole other picture. With these two “victims” now wantonly blowing up a truck, there’s no telling what they are capable of. They have fully crossed over into outlaw land. There is no going back.

PLOT 

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

CHARACTER 

THEME 

Setup

Point of Attack

End of 1st Act

Midpoint

Louise plans a
weekend away
Louise murders HarlanJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go
to Mexico
Louise gets $6700
from Jimmy
J.D. steals Louise’s
$6700
Thelma goes
with her
Harlan tries to rape
Thelma
Darryl threatensThelma decides to go
to Mexico
Thelma promises
to make up for it
Thelma robs a storeThelma takes a
cop hostage
They can’t plead self-defenseA man is dead/Louise was rapedLouise regrets/Thelma no regrets

End of 2nd Act

They are charged with murderThelma: “I can’t go back.”Thelma feels awakeLewd trucker encounter #1Lewd trucker encounter #2

Climax

Louise blows up the truckLewd trucker encounter #3Thelma helps blow
up the truck
All Points Bulletin

But, if this is Thelma’s story . . .

. . . why is it Louise who leads the discussion with the truck driver and takes the first shot at his truck?

PLOT 

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

CHARACTER 

THEME 

Setup

Point of Attack

End of 1st Act

Midpoint

Louise plans a
weekend away
Louise murders HarlanJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go
to Mexico
Louise gets $6700
from Jimmy
J.D. steals Louise’s
$6700
Thelma goes
with her
Harlan tries to rape
Thelma
Darryl threatensThelma decides to go
to Mexico
Thelma promises
to make up for it
Thelma robs a storeThelma takes a
cop hostage
They can’t plead self-defenseA man is dead/Louise was rapedLouise regrets/Thelma no regrets

End of 2nd Act

They are charged with murderThelma: “I can’t go back.”Thelma feels awakeLewd trucker encounter #1Lewd trucker encounter #2

Climax

Louise blows up the truckLewd trucker encounter #3All Points BulletinThelma helps blow
up the truck
Louise responds to insult
with murder
Louise responds to insult
with property damage

There are only two acts of violence in this film committed by the women: the murder of Harlan and blowing up the truck. Each is an expression of Louise’s rage and is perpetrated for the purpose of making a statement. In the first, Thelma is a shocked bystander. In the second, Thelma is right alongside her, gleefully participating. This is because Louise’s rage has enabled Thelma to access her own rage. When Louise says at the beginning, “You get what you settle for,” the comment appears to refer to what they are both settling for with the men in their life. But on the thematic level, it is also speaking to women’s acceptance of demeaning treatment from men in general. These women aren’t settling anymore.

You can hear Callie Khouri’s voice in this scene, as if she’s addressing the entire male gender: “Where do you guys get off treating women that way? Would you treat your mother or your sister like that?” Here we see Khouri’s ultimate fantasy of what she’d like to see happen: that men who sexually insult women are directly confronted and forced to apologize. In having Louise shoot Harlan, Khouri was saying, “Sometimes I just want to shoot someone for all the abuse I get,” as evidenced by her quote about confronting the old man on the street. But in the course of the film, we’ve seen a tempering of that position. Now she is saying, “No, I don’t really want to shoot them in the face. I just want them to apologize. Is that asking so damned much?”

How do you follow such a strident, yet effective expression of anger? Again, a transition scene is needed. So we return to the police car with the cop in the trunk for a bit of levity before the tragic ending. In true comic form, it is full of surprises:

What is a Rasta bicyclist doing in the middle of the desert?

However, this scene also serves to show compassion for the poor guy who got locked in there, just as Thelma and Louise have done throughout the film. Louise is careful to keep Jimmy in the dark about what’s going on so as not to make him an accomplice. Thelma is careful, before putting the cop in the trunk, to give him air holes. And since being locked in a trunk in a New Mexico desert is extremely dangerous, here Khouri is being careful to let us know that somebody has found the cop and he’s going to be okay.

But what does the image of a Rastafarian bring to the mix? Like these women, he’s outside the law and in an oppressed social class, which provides the same kind of power switch between him and the cop that the women had when they did the deed. We don’t want to have another woman come along to let the cop go, as that would be too “on the nose.” So we have the next best thing.

Interestingly, in Khouri’s original script this scene has a different tone. It reads:

The images presented here are decidedly heavy and sad. A battered pickup truck suggests poverty, an old man brings in age and decay and using a crow bar to pry open the trunk shows great exertion. All of these lean toward a feeling of disempowerment, whereas having a Rasta rescue the cop gives power to another underclass. And with the blowing-marijuana-smoke bit, it’s funny.

Chapter 11: The Resolution

Now that Louise’s point has been made, Thelma’s transformation has been tested and the cop has been let out of the trunk (we presume), all that’s left for the Resolution is to answer the question, “so what happens to them?” Here is a nice example of a film that so thoroughly plays out and resolves its throughlines in theme and character that it earns itself the right to an exciting action finish with a good old-fashioned car chase.

But first, an All Points Bulletin ratchets up the tension to its highest pitch, the inevitable result of blowing up a tanker:

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Louise and Thelma are oblivious to all this attention until they see a couple of cop cars passing the other way.

Louise veers off the highway and the chase is on:

However, the calm soon passes and the tension is ratcheted up once more:

They come to the edge of the canyon and slam on the brakes.

There’s that aggression double standard again. As we have already seen, Louise does not take well to aggressive threats from men:

Louise has decided she would rather go down fighting than get caught. She told us this back in her last conversation with Hal:

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But Thelma has another idea:

PLOT 

 Thelma as follower 

 Thelma takes charge 

CHARACTER 

THEME 

Setup

Point of Attack

End of 1st Act

Midpoint

Louise plans a
weekend away
Louise murders HarlanJimmy hesitatesLouise decides to go
to Mexico
Louise gets $6700
from Jimmy
J.D. steals Louise’s
$6700
Thelma goes
with her
Harlan tries to rape
Thelma
Darryl threatensThelma decides to go
to Mexico
Thelma promises
to make up for it
Thelma robs a storeThelma takes a
cop hostage
They can’t plead self-defenseA man is dead/Louise was rapedLouise regrets/Thelma no regrets

End of 2nd Act

They are charged with murderThelma: “I can’t go back.”Thelma feels awakeLewd trucker encounter #1Lewd trucker encounter #2

Climax

Louise blows up the truckLewd trucker encounter #3All Points BulletinThelma helps blow
up the truck
Louise responds to insult
with murder
Louise responds to insult
with property damage
Louise won’t give upThey refuse to surrenderThelma: “Let’s keep going.”They keep going

Resolution

Chapter 12: The Ending

Now, this ending warrants some scrutiny to address the controversy that surrounds it. When the film came out, there was an outcry, especially among feminists, that said, “women who go against the system have to kill themselves? What’s so empowering about that?” To gain a better understanding of why Khouri made this choice, it’s helpful to look at the potential alternatives.

The first, obvious, alternative is that they actually make it to Mexico:

They get a lucky break . . .

Another possible ending is they give themselves up:

Trapped at the edge of the Grand Canyon, they surrender, . . .

A third alternative is suggested when Louise starts loading her gun to make a “last stand,” like the ending of Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid:

They load up their guns, . . .

Ridley Scott did shoot another ending that shows an alternate attempt at portraying cosmic victory:

Hal’s expression looking down into the canyon tells us that the women are dead. But then we are taken back to the open road leading to the iconic lone mountain with the T-bird scurrying away. Clearly, the idea was to portray the real-world result of their choice literally, while explicitly indicating their metaphorical escape from the forces bearing down on them. It seems, however, that this ending was ultimately deemed a bit heavy-handed in its delivery. Nonetheless, Ridley Scott stayed with the decision not to show their death. The freeze-frame and fade to white presents an image of their spiritual freedom.

Sadly, too often when a filmmaker opts for a more subtle choice, he or she ends up losing a portion of his or her audience. Indeed, to be able to fully engage with the story of Thelma & Louise, a viewer must be able to read it as a metaphor.

A few years ago, an interesting comparative study appeared in the release of the film Monster, written and directed by Patty Jenkins and starring Charlize Theron. Based on the true story of Aileen Wuornos, a prostitute in Florida who killed several of her johns, this excellent film has distinct thematic similarities to Thelma & Louise. A woman, who was raped over and over in childhood and became a prostitute at age thirteen, is brutalized by one of her customers and kills him. But her subsequent targets are men who simply said or did the wrong thing, triggering a post-traumatic stress reaction that caused her to kill them, too. She finally got caught and eventually was put to death by society, having been labeled “the first female serial killer.”

When this dramatized version of Wuornos’s life came out, I jokingly called it “Thelma & Louise’s Evil Twin” because of its much harsher depiction of how things are for women who are raped. Jenkins shows the dark, gritty reality that Khouri, in contrast, is only hinting at. It is as if Thelma & Louise is the clarion call and Monster is the truth manifested among us.

In the courtroom scene at the end of Monster (taken directly from court documents), Wuornos is defiantly unapologetic for what she did and rageful at the system that condemns her:

By contrast, Thelma & Louise is dainty, polite and sweet.

While these films paint corresponding pictures of how society vilifies women who respond to aggression with aggression, they each make their point through different forms of drama. In Monster, it is done through a faithful reportage of real-life events, while in Thelma & Louise, it is done through an artful use of metaphor. The biggest difference is in Khouri’s choice not to have her victim/aggressors get killed by the powers that be, as Wuornos was, but instead to have them find a degree of freedom by enacting their own fate. In so doing, Khouri envisions a world in which true, all-encompassing freedom can exist for women. It is the metaphoric nature of Thelma & Louise that gives the author the opportunity to make such a profound statement. In fact, Thelma & Louise is probably one of the most powerful metaphors ever to appear on film.

Khouri wasn’t out to tell a story of victimhood. She wanted her women to be empowered but within an as-yet-unchanging reality. In an interview in the published version of the screenplay, Khouri says this: “Women who are completely free from all the shackles that restrain them have no place in this world. The world is not big enough to support them. They will be brought down if they stay here.”8 Note that Khouri is describing individual empowerment (women who are free from shackles) in the midst of social oppression (a world not big enough for them). These are the two images she wanted to leave her viewer with. She wanted you to feel the thrill of liberation, but she also wanted to make sure you understand that such liberation cannot survive in the world as it currently exists.

In the same interview, Khouri points out that people who complain about the ending being a suicide are reading the film too literally. “I mean, come on! Read a book!” she tells her critics.⁠9 The literal-minded viewers are unable to see the metaphoric triumph, so they demand a fantasy triumph. But a margaritas-by-the-sea ending would only be promoting a false idea of how the world is. Khouri’s choice is more sophisticated. She saw no chance at real-world triumph for the women and was unwilling to sugarcoat that reality. But nor did she want them brought down by an unjust world. She wanted them to have a higher triumph, so she gave them the only triumph available to them, in the form of transcendence to a purely spiritual realm. “After all they went through,” says Khouri, “I didn’t want anybody to be able to touch them. They flew away, out of this world and into the mass unconscious.”10

Indeed, the passing of time has shown her words were apt. It seems Thelma and Louise did fly into our mass unconscious, because now, twenty-five years later, the film is still being watched, talked about and written about. The reality being depicted may not be palatable to everyone. You can accept it or you can argue against it, which is one of the primary human functions of drama. You can also be grateful that someone, once upon a time, put forth a strong statement that continues to resonate. Despite the fate of its main characters, Thelma & Louise is the film that doesn’t die.

Glossary

cause and effect The events of the present scene are a direct result of what happened in the immediately preceding scene. In turn, the present scene's events make the events of the following scene imperative. Serves to build dramatic momentum by interrelating the events in such a way that the story is continuously pushed forward.

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character transformation The main character goes from A to B in behavioral, psychological or emotional terms to arrive at an increased awareness or a new way of being in the world. Also called the character arc.

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Climax In a plot-driven story, whereas at the End of the Second Act the situation has seemingly become as bad as it can be, at the Climax it is even worse. In a character story, this is where the statement of transformation is put to the test and must be demonstrated through external action. The Climax offers the final opportunity for the main character's success or failure.

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End of the First Act The moment when the main character either makes a decision or chooses a course of action that is in response to the unbalancing events of the Point of Attack and launches the narrative drive of the Second Act.

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End of the Second Act The point when things appear to be as bad as they can possibly be. In a plot-driven story, external events, such as a point of no return or a confrontation with the darkest hour, have pushed the main character far afield from his or her normal world. In a character-driven story, this is also the moment of the main character's internal transformation. With his or her back up against a wall, the main character makes a statement of transformation.

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First Act An initial sequence of scenes, roughly the first quarter of the film, that introduces the main characters, gives background exposition, establishes the tone and style of the film and sets the plot in motion.

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flashback A scene or sequence that reveals an important event from the past in a character's life pertinent to his or her current situation. When used well, it helps further the story or characters. When used badly, it spells things out too much. Flashbacks should not be overused unless their use is a stylistic choice to tell a nonlinear story.

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flashforward A scene that represents a jump forward in time, out of the chronological sequence of a story. Usually used for a very specific structural or stylistic purpose.

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inciting incident The event that begins the story we have been brought in to see, usually an external event in the main character's life that throws his or her world out of balance. Also called the Point of Attack.

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Midpoint A scene or event halfway through the story that prompts a significant change in direction. In a plot-driven story, it is a first attempt to solve the problem, which either partially succeeds or completely fails, thus, creating a setback, reversal or turning point. In a character-driven story, it is a nearly cataclysmic external event that creates an internal shift in the main character.

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on the lam An American idiom that means making an escape while being pursued by the police, usually heading for a border to be outside of legal jurisdiction.

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on the nose A distracting and unnecessarily literal reference, as in “on-the-nose dialogue” in which a character’s speech is so direct and revealing of how he or she is feeling that it strains credibility. Also, dialogue that is lacking in subtext.

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parallel action Cutting back and forth between two scenes or sequences that are going on simultaneously. Most often, parallel action is used to build tension. The burglar is breaking into the house as the family is on their way home.

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payoff The moment when a “plant,” a prop or piece of information that has been previously established, comes back into the story to have a significant impact.

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plant A prop or piece of information established early in the story that will play a key role in a “payoff” later on.

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Point of Attack The event that begins the story we have been brought in to see, usually an external event in the main character’s life that throws his or her world out of balance. Also commonly called the Inciting Incident. The term Point of Attack comes from European drama theory.

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Resolution The problem has been dealt with and a new order is established. We are given a sense of how the main character's life has been changed as a result of this experience.

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Second Act In the Second Act, the middle half of the film, the main character grapples with the problem and endeavors to overcome it while confronting setbacks, reversals, complications, obstacles, and ticking clocks presented through parallel action, cause and effect, plant and payoff, and every other dramatic device available to increase tension, raise stakes and push the story forward.

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Setup The first few scenes of the screenplay showing what “normal” is for the main character and the world of the story, while also giving some hints of what is to come.

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sympathetic character A method by which the viewer is invited into the story through attachment to a main character. This attachment is created by a moment early in the story when the main character is shown to be at some kind of power disadvantage. He or she is humiliated, neglected, betrayed, abandoned, persecuted or even just having a bad day. This underdog moment serves to get the viewer on board with the main character in order that his or her investment in the story is sustained through all of the character’s tests and trials. For a video illustrating sympathetic character, go here.

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Third Act The Third Act provides the answer to the question, what happens then? The external conflict is resolved, the main character has regained a sense of internal equilibrium, the subplots are tied up and secondary characters are settled into new circumstances.

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Endnotes

  1. Syd Field, Four Screenplays: Studies in the American Screenplay, 1994, p.9.
  2. Field, p.10.
  3. Field, p.11.
  4. Callie Khouri, Thelma & Louise and Something To Talk About: Screenplays, 1996, p.xiv.
  5. Khouri, p.11.
  6. Khouri, p.83.
  7. Khouri, p.172.
  8. Khouri, p.xiv.
  9. Khouri, p.xiv.
  10. Khouri, p.xiv.

Thelma & Louise: A Screenplay Analysis

by Jennine Lanouette

 

 

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Acknowledgments

Two years ago, I spent the summer with two college interns, Kayla Raymond and Scott Granlund, making videos, selecting photos and designing layouts in a small office generously rented to me for little money by Tim Partridge and Greg Maloney of 32Ten Studios. Thanks to their help, I was able to put together my original prototype screenbook.

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As I have labored away at this project, it has been especially gratifying to have the support of my fellow screenwriting teachers: Lisa Rosenberg, J. Mira Kopell, Patty Meyer, my former Columbia classmates Don Bohlinger, Paul Gulino and Peter Wentworth, and my curriculum design pals from The New School, Loren Caplin and Bill Pace. Other early supporters whose encouragement sustained me are Michelle Byrd, Ira Deutchman, David Leitner and Colin Brown. Sharan Sklar got on board at the prototype stage, guiding me in business development, and Justine Jacob of Blythe, Lee and Associates contributed a critical element by vetting the books for fair use compliance.

I have also been fortunate to have the support of two thought leaders in the ebook world, Brian O’Leary of Magellan Media Partners and Bob Stein of the Institute for the Future of the Book. The gift of their attention has been a highly valued beacon signaling I’m on the right track. To Bob I owe a special thank you for putting me in contact with Dan Visel, who is the second person without whom these screenbooks could not have happened.

Early in this process, I heard a speaker at an ebook conference say, “Your programmer is your coauthor.” I understood this in theory, but the idea of being able to find someone with the necessary technical chops, who could also engage meaningfully with my content and know how to advocate for it, seemed a tall order. But I have been extremely fortunate to find that person in Dan. The feats of programming bravura he has been able to pull off for the benefit of our user’s experience have at times appeared to me as nothing short of magic. As an added bonus, he is a pleasure to work with.

I must share credit for the success of our Kickstarter campaign with interns Winston Mapa and Jenny Swartz and marketers Phil Chidel and Frank Colin. I was also very lucky to receive endorsements from Anita Monga, Richard Abramowitz and Larry Karaszewski.

Crucial technical guidance has come from Terry Schussler, Juliet Pokorny and Robin Wise, and I am indebted to Vivien Hilgrove for referring me to Tom Christopher, who has been a tremendous resource for video-edit problem solving. A huge thank you goes to Ben Zweig for guiding us through the morass of video encoding. I must also thank my friend Cat Woods for sending me to the Marin Renaissance Center, where I had the great good luck of being assigned to Ramin Rahmormozi, our invaluable e-commerce mentor.

Of course, I would be nowhere without my production and marketing team: Angie Traeger, Sam Eshtehardi, Anne Ross, Dave Repetto, Joanne Parsont, Keith Moore and A. J. Guerrero. I am also fortunate to be working with a group of highly skilled contractors: Landon Elmore, Tom Rubalcava, Sharon Silva, Taylor Ray, Martin Bonnici (Shadeena Films), Eli Noyes and Ralph Guggenheim (Alligator Planet), Randy Phillippe (Catsville Recording) and Jim LeBrecht (Berkeley Sound Artists).

I have been bolstered over and over by my personal cheering section, good friends Susan Sanford, Nancy Gerstman and Gail Silva, along with the loudest of them all, Dad, my biggest fan.

I would be remiss if I did not also pay respect to my teacher, the late Frank Daniel, from whom I, like so many others, gained an abiding respect for screenwriting as a new art form that is nonetheless deeply rooted in a long-standing tradition of drama. Frank Daniel was one of those rare teachers who inspires a special kind of devotion—the kind that makes you want to bow down, humbling yourself in recognition of his unique influence.

Finally, the third person without whom these ebooks could not have happened is my life partner, Ed, whose patience, tolerance and capacity for giving never cease to astonish me. His faith in this project is boundless.

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For my mother.

The Origins of This Method

This book is a digital rendering of one of the many script analysis lectures I have given to students and film professionals in New York City and the San Francisco Bay Area for more than two decades. Only recently has it become possible to present such video-dependent content as a “screenbook,” a format that provides the same visual and media experience to a much wider audience than the classroom allows. This new technology has revolutionized what I do. In time, I will convert twenty-five of my in-depth script analysis lectures into “anytime, anywhere” screenbook form.

The foundation of my approach to script analysis can be found in the work of the late Frank Daniel, with whom I studied at the Columbia University Graduate Film Program in New York. Frank was a producer, writer and teacher who had immigrated to the United States in 1969 from what was then Czechoslovakia. He soon became one of the country’s most highly regarded teachers of screenwriting, infusing American film schools with a European sensibility about what constitutes screen drama.

Among the many writers and directors who were influenced by his work are Milos Forman, Ivan Passer, David Lynch and Terrence Malick. Sadly, Frank never wrote a book (at least not in English), and I have often wondered if part of his reason was that, like me, he could not see a way to analyze a film without being able to refer directly to the moving images on a screen. One of my hopes for these screenbooks is that they will spread his influence more widely.

Although over the years I have ventured beyond what Frank taught me, the core principles of his teaching are still firmly embedded in my work. First among them is his emphasis on the practical function of structure to create a desired effect. The story is simply a vehicle with which to create a psychological and emotional impact on the viewer. It is how the story is structured that determines what that impact will be.

Frank also advocated for principles and tools over formulas. He believed that having a thorough grasp of underlying dramatic principles and available storytelling tools frees the imagination to create and innovate(1)(1) For a thorough elucidation of the screenwriting tools Frank Daniel taught, see David Howard and Edward Mabley’s excellent The Tools of Screenwriting: A Writer’s Guide to the Craft and Elements of a Screenplay., whereas following overly proscriptive, point-by-point methods will stifle creativity.

But Frank was an equally ardent advocate for utilizing the undergirding strength of three-act structure. I remember my classmates and I being astonished when a rumor circulated that he could even identify a distinct three-act form in Alain Resnais’s seemingly formless Hiroshima Mon Amour. He was committed to the idea that the artist must know the historical precedents for two reasons: to avoid repeating them and, more significantly, to succeed at innovating from them.

But perhaps most important to Frank, a structure must be governed by psychological truth, which is revealed in both the character’s behavior and in the cause-and-effect logic of the unfolding events. He was also careful to distinguish between critical theory, rooted in external philosophy and of limited value to the artist, and analytical thinking, in which the work is examined in relation to itself and to the totality of creative work over the ages, an essential part of the creative process.

Frank’s script analysis class was a five-hour marathon, which further underscores the ease and elegance of today’s digital technology. First we would watch the film, and then he would go through it again, scene by scene, to reveal its hidden structural secrets. Video was not yet in wide use, so he would use an “analyzer,” a large 16mm projector that could laboriously project in slow motion or be slammed into a sprocket-mangling reverse to review a segment. When he stopped the projector to discuss a scene, it would throw a lead screen in front of the bulb to prevent the film from burning up, leaving only a washed-out image visible for study. Needless to say, the tension of worrying that the film might melt before our eyes just the same was a bit distracting.

By the time I got around to teaching script analysis, I had videotape allowing me to zip through the film and stop and start at will with a magic wand-like remote control. Then came the DVD, with which I could jump to the end and then right back to the beginning again. The first time I watched a DVD on my laptop, I thought I’d died and gone to heaven. Since then, I have spent many hours sitting in a café preparing my lecture with just earbuds and two small windows on my screen – viewing, typing, viewing, typing. Nowadays, there is no excuse for not doing this kind of close analysis of films.

I started with the films that I had seen Frank analyze, but soon began adding new films each term. This led to noticing structural patterns that he had not discussed. After a few years, I went back to school for a more thorough grounding in the history and theory of drama from the Greeks to the 20th century. I became an admirer of Euripides for his intricate structures and iconoclastic themes. I discovered the influence of the medieval morality play in the work of Shakespeare. I was awed by the psychological complexity of the characters drawn by Strindberg. And I traced the beginnings of three-act structure in the work of Henrik Ibsen. These studies have greatly informed my investigations of how filmed drama has evolved in the last hundred years.

I view a film’s screenplay not so much as the bunch of words that appears on the page, but, rather, as the scenes, characters, and dramatic structure that we finally see on screen. Thus, I analyze not from the script but from the finished film. I operate under the assumption that (at least with the great films) what ended up on screen is what was deemed in the end to work best, whether by the writer on paper, the director on set and in the editing room, or the viewers who vote with their feet.

Although I sympathize with the screenwriter’s resentment of the auteur theory, in which the director is considered the “author” of the film, I have also found, in my background research, instances in which the director did, indeed, have the greater hand in what the filmgoer sees. On occasion, I have even found that the producer or lead actor deserves more credit than he or she has been given. This is why, for me, the point is to acknowledge what ultimately worked on screen and then to learn from it.

The films I choose to analyze are those that are widely considered to qualify as “great.” Such a designation can be debated at length, of course. But I have come up with three criteria that have worked for me. The first and most important is whether a film has staying power, which is to say, if, many years after its release, people are still watching it and talking about it. I take this level of enduring appeal as an indication that there is something in how the film is constructed that creates a deep resonance in people’s consciousness.

My second criterion is whether the film had a significant cultural impact when it was released, which is not to be mistaken for box-office success. What I’m interested in is if people talked about it and wrote about it, if it received a number of awards, if it turned up on the top ten lists of respected critics, and if its title or snatches of its dialogue became part of everyday speech.

Finally, I look for a diversity of form among the films I analyze in order to explore different ways that structure can be applied. I like to challenge myself with films that are generally considered to be unconventional in their narrative style.

Given that a film fulfills these criteria, I am then curious to find out what makes it tick. However, my methods are driven as much by instinct as they are by rational thought.

My first step is to break down the film into outline form, playing each scene and writing a one or two-sentence summary of its most basic dramatic elements, to get an overall view of the structure. This exercise allows me to get a look at the forest rather than being stuck among the trees. Although this process is laborious and can be time-consuming, it delivers a great payoff in enriching one’s understanding of story structure. I recommend it highly as a way to study the films you admire and want to emulate.

When I’ve finished the outline, I print it out and “meditate” on it, literally staring at it to spark a free association process. I read the outline through and then read it again, looking for patterns, connections and layers to emerge. When I have filled up the margins with notes, I grab a blank sheet of paper and begin charting the structure on a timeline.

The benefit of studying time-tested, cultural-impact films is that you know, going in, that it is a cohesive whole that has crossed generations and withstood repeated viewings. The question is, how does it achieve that breadth and depth? To answer this, I look for a thematic cohesion and then try to find how the story’s structure creates and supports that overarching meaning. Sometimes I will draw multiple timelines to chart interweaving structures. Other times I use color coding to represent different time frames or story lines. If it is a nonlinear story, I might chart it in chronological order to gain some insight into what the writer hoped to achieve by jumbling the events in time.

Looking at a film through the lens of three-act structure is a convenient jumping-off point. It provides a template that you can lay on top of the outline to see how it matches up to the most commonly recognized model. “Let’s see if this story launches with a point of attack. Wow! There it is! Plain as day.” But you don’t want to be satisfied with simply naming it. You want to look at how that component – in this case, the point of attack – is functioning. First, you determine how it is being used in common with other films and then you look at how it is being used differently. The goal is to see how the film has taken the conventional structural components and used them in service to that particular story.

That is where you will begin to see the art emerge.

Why Analyze Great Films?

I, for one, am a firm believer in the essential role of gut instinct and unconscious impulse in the creative process. Otherwise, we are simply automatons following external rules with our thinking brains to manufacture soulless entertainment. As any artist knows, genuine creativity comes from a much more mysterious place than rational thought; a seemingly unknowable place of accumulated wisdom that functions in a manner quite contrary to how our conscious mind works.

Why, then, if I hold this conviction so dear, am I also such a passionate advocate of applying one’s thinking brain to analysis of the inner workings of great films? The short answer is because conscious thinking is vital to the cultivation of one’s unconscious wisdom.

As a screenwriter, y­ou have this raw material gus­hing forth from your imagination and you have to get it into a form that will be intelligible to others. You have to organize it, shape it and refine it. So in comes the cerebral cortex to put your amorphous ideas into a structure that others will understand. Ideally, your conscious and unconscious minds engage in a back-and-forth collaboration. When your conscious mind gets stuck, you take a step back and say, “Okay, Unconscious, what have you got for me now?” The unconscious then responds with a sparkling nugget, and you exclaim, “What a great idea! Now, let’s see, what do I need to do to make it fit with the rest of the story?”

As in any partnership, this collaboration works best when both parties maintain respect for what the other does best. The conscious mind must be willing to say, “You are the master of creativity, Unconscious. I am here to serve you.” This allows the portals to fly open and the ideas to flow. If the conscious mind is acting like a control freak, trying to think its way through the creative process, those doors to the unconscious won’t open.

However, the role of the conscious mind is to serve as the master of intelligible communication. Without it, we are hindered in our ability to share with each other all our wild and wonderful ideas. While inspiration comes from an intuitive place, conscious thought is essential for organizing, tweaking and refining. The way the unconscious shows respect for that expertise is by readily absorbing and putting to use what the conscious mind has figured out.

In other words, the unconscious is highly trainable. If you make a regular practice of consciously absorbing into your unconscious the fundamental principles for structuring intelligible stories, your unconscious will be far more likely to cough up its nuggets in a communicable form. Rather than having to consciously rule out the bad choices, you will be making those decisions unconsciously.

Studying the great films through deep analysis of their screenplays is the most effective and efficient way to train the unconscious mind in the principles of screenwriting. Overthinking your own creative process can kill your work, but thinking through the creative process of others who have mastered the form will embed the secrets to their success deep in your unconscious mind.

Of course, another way you can train your unconscious is to make your first screenplay into a feature film and then watch to see if it succeeds or fails. But that’s a considerably more expensive and time consuming method. Thousands of others have already gone through that trial and error process, so you might as well benefit from their collective wisdom. The common language that has evolved over the course of drama history provides a starting point from which to analyze the great works of our own time.

Three-act Structure

Over the past 20 years, a screenwriting advice industry has grown up pushing the latest, greatest methods for ensuring popular success. The important thing to understand about these methods is that they are all variations on our historically derived model of drama, generically referred to as three-act structure. Traditional three-act structure contains much less, in the minimal requirements it puts forth, as well as much more, in the myriad ways it can be applied, than it may appear when only seen through the lens of the branded methods. The real value of this structure, in its unvarnished form, is in how it lays out the minimum necessary elements for creating a cohesive whole that will be intelligible to your viewer, while having enough openness to give your unconscious the free rein it needs for true creativity.

Three-act structure is the one-point perspective of screenwriting. Just as in drawing, you have two points in the foreground and a third vanishing point on a horizon line to orient the viewer in space, in drama, you have a beginning, middle and end to orient the viewer in time. Within this three-part structure, there are infinite possibilities for achieving more complex structural models. After years of study, I have come to feel that the particular structure being used is not as important as simply making sure you have some kind of underlying system in place. When you apply your system consistently throughout your story, the viewer will quickly adapt and unconsciously derive security in sensing there is a structure at work. But knowing how to create that structure is not a simple matter and a beginning writer needs a place to begin.

The Origins of Three-act Structure

In the 2,500-year history of Western dramatic literature, three-act structure is actually relatively new. It was not until the mid-19th century that dramatists began to finally break free of a highly proscriptive, closely dictated form that dominated Western drama for almost 2,000 years. Although in screenwriting circles Aristotle is often credited with the invention of three-act structure, sadly, he was not that specific. What he actually said was that a tragedy should have a beginning, middle and end. In so doing, what he did invent was the idea that a dramatic work must have a structure, period. But by not specifying that this structure should have three acts, he left an opening for the first century Roman theorist Horace to declare that a play “should consist of five acts – no more, no less,“ a somewhat arbitrary dictate that would, nonetheless, dominate Western dramatic literature until well into the 19th century. In the Neo-Classical period of the 16th to 18th centuries, playwrights were even required to write their plays in five acts (in France, it was legislated into law).

In the experimental zeal of the popular theater, from the late 18th century melodrama to the early 19th century well-made play, a three-part organizing principle began to appear despite adherence to the five-act constraints of raising and lowering the curtain. But in 1863, German theorist Gustav Freytag, in his Technique of the Drama, graphed Horace’s dictates into a pyramid, with the climax in the middle, further entrenching the five-act form. Nonetheless, leading playwrights of that time began innovating in a three-part form, including Henrik Ibsen, George Bernard Shaw and Oscar Wilde. As a result, the English drama critic William Archer, in his 1912 classic Playmaking, came to observe, with some ambivalence, that organizing a play into three acts might actually make more sense than five.

A halting acceptance can also be seen in other playwriting manuals of the time. In 1908, the American playwright William Thompson Price explicitly referred to “three natural divisions” of exposition, development and denouement and in 1936 John Howard Lawson described “three cycles of action” underlying a well-structured drama. Then, in 1939, University of Michigan professor Kenneth Thorpe Rowe stated simply, “In recent years, by no rule, but in general practice, three acts has come more and more to be the standard,” finally putting the five-act form to rest. (Rowe was the teacher of respected screenwriting guru Robert McKee, by the way.)

What this history shows is not only a tortured process of casting off burdensome requirements to make room for creative openness, but also a steady evolution from arbitrary dictates to practical guidelines. My guess is that when Aristotle introduced the notion that successful drama is dependent on structure, he was making a plea to young playwrights to write their plays in an intelligible, as opposed to chaotic, form. But it took many more centuries of playwrights to figure out how to do that, first laboring within and ultimately pushing their way through the externally imposed dictates. Thus, I view three-act structure as a hard won model for structured openness. But the key to maintaining a balance between the structure and the openness is to keep a focus on function.

The Function of Three-act Structure

The first essential function of any story is to begin it, which is to say to invite the viewer in and orient them to what’s going on. Thus, the First Act contains the necessary elements to do that – establish the situation, introduce a few characters, maybe give some background information, and definitely set up the style of the film. About halfway through the First Act comes the Point of Attack (also known as the Inciting Incident), an event that moves past all the introducing and gets on with beginning the story. By the End of the First Act, the various ramifications of the Point of Attack have become clear and a course of action is launched to address these challenges.

The second essential function of a story is to end it, which is to say, to give the story a sense of purpose by arriving at a different place from where it started. This is usually accomplished with, among other things, the triumph over an enemy, the solving of a mystery, the resolution of a problem or the internal evolution of a flawed human being. But for an ending to be convincing to the viewer, it cannot be easy (because we all know life is not easy). This is the job of the Third Act, to give the story authenticity by bringing it to a close with a sufficient amount of difficulty. The first structural marker of the Third Act is the point that marks the End of the Second Act, when events have intensified to a seemingly unsurpassable pitch. Then comes the Climax, when that height of intensity is topped to provide an ultimate release of tension. Finally, the Resolution signals the story’s definitive conclusion by giving a glimpse of the new normal.

What’s left, then, as the third essential task of a story, is to progress from the beginning to the ending through a developing middle that is credible and compelling. This is the job of the Second Act, to bring in setbacks, reversals, complications, obstacles, ticking clocks, raised stakes, parallel action, cause and effect, plant and payoff, preparation and aftermath and, in short, utilize every dramatic opportunity available. But the Second Act is a long stretch of territory to cover, so a little added structure can help in getting through it. This is the function of the Midpoint, to give some definition to the Second Act with a mini crisis or a partially met goal that then prompts a regrouping or a shift in direction.

Placing these essential functions in their natural order, here’s how they build upon each other:

  1. The Setup. Introducing the normal world of the story.
  2. The Point of Attack. An event occurs that throws “normal” out of control.
  3. The End of the First Act. It has become clear something must be done, and a course of action is set.
  4. The Midpoint, or First Culmination of the Second Act. A first attempt to solve the problem, which either fails or has only partial success.
  5. The End of the Second Act, or Second Culmination. A second attempt is made, which leads to the situation becoming as bad as it could possibly be.
  6. The Climax. The situation goes from bad to worse, which leads to a release that makes everything better.
  7. The Resolution. Showing the return to normalcy.

These are the fundamental elements of the traditional three-act model. Together, they provide a highly effective structure for building a conventional, plot-based story and bringing it to a satisfying conclusion.

However, by itself this model is somewhat limited. It doesn’t account for the internal journey of the main character. Whereas in the plot, the character moves towards an external goal, in the character’s internal life another end point is reached — one of behavioral, emotional or psychological change.

A Character Structure Model

My definition of a story is that you have to go from A to B, which is to say you have to give the viewer the sense that they have ended up somewhere different from where they started. How this works in a plot-based story is fairly evident: the solving of a problem, the triumph over an enemy or the unraveling of a mystery all reflect an A to B progression from beginning to end.

However, a necessary aspect of cultivating your creative unconscious is opening your mind to the possibility that models may exist beyond what you accept as given. I open myself to finding a new model each time I study a new film. That model then becomes embedded in my unconscious and informs my understanding of other films. This willingness to be open is what led me to see that there can be another storyline, operating in tandem with the plot storyline, that provides a parallel A to B progression in the main character. For this story, the B that is arrived at is an internal shift from, say, timidity to courage, or insensitivity to tenderness, or any one of hundreds of ways in which people evolve in response to life’s external challenges.

Just as the structural markers of the plot serve to move the action forward, a parallel set of structural markers serves to move forward the main character’s internal journey by operating on a psychological level. In my analysis of great films, this is how I’ve seen those character markers functioning time and time again:

  1. The Challenge to Assumptions. (Plot structure: The Point of Attack.) The same external event that begins the plot progression also serves to present the main character with a serious challenge to his or her bedrock assumptions about life.
  2. The Decision. (Plot structure: The End of the First Act.) The moment in the plot that sets out a course of action also constitutes a decision on the part of the main character. It is usually the first proactive thing the main character does, often a bit outside their normal mode of behavior, stretching them in the direction of their transformation.
  3. The Midpoint Shift. (Plot structure: The Midpoint.) Whereas, in the plot, the Midpoint is the first attempt to solve the problem, which either partially succeeds or completely fails, for the character progression it is a nearly cataclysmic external event that causes an internal shift in the main character. Up until this point, the main character could still go back to being the person they were at the beginning. But as a result of this event, the character’s internal balance shifts so that they are being pulled toward who they ultimately become at the end.
  4. The Statement. (Plot structure: The End of the Second Act.) Throughout the second act, the character experiences more and more external pressure until, finally he or she makes a statement of transformation, either implicitly or explicitly, outwardly expressing an internal change.
  5. The Test. (Plot structure: The Climax.) But the character’s transformation is not complete until it has been put to the test through action. In the plot structure, at the end of the second act things are seemingly as bad as they can possibly be and at the climax they get worse. This ties in with the character structure very neatly because, to motivate a statement of transformation, things must have become pretty bad, and then, in a high-stakes test, they will only become worse. This test gives proof that the character’s transformation is real and, likely, will last.

(I have left off discussion of the Setup and the Resolution since they are simply the intro and outro to the story and their function is largely the same in the plot and character progressions.)

In my observation, if you want to tell a character transformation story, these five points are the minimum necessary to provide credibility. As we all know, generally speaking, human beings are highly resistant to change. Thus, you make a character’s change more believable by motivating it in stages, over time. It is the structural transitions in the first and second acts that serve to incrementally progress, and, thus, give support to, your character’s ultimate transformation in the third act.

The point is not to adhere blindly to these structural guideposts. It is to understand their function and utilize them in service to your story. And, of course, it is the nature of any function that if you see another way to fulfill it (that serves the story better), by all means, do that.

Adding Theme to the Mix

In my early investigations into screenplay analysis, it was already clear to me that what makes a film great has as much to do with the strength of the character storyline as it does with all the machinations of plot. But somehow having only two parallel structures felt out of balance. I kept wondering if there was a third story progression I should take into account. Maybe for a story to be structurally sound it needs three foundational components, like a three-legged stool.

So I decided to look at theme, that elusive element of larger meaning, to see if a distinct A to B progression could be found there as well. In literature, the theme of a story is treated as a static statement on the nature of things, as in Love Conquers All or The Sins of the Father Are Visited Upon the Son. As a result, when I started teaching script analysis, I didn’t pay much attention to theme since, being a static element, I couldn’t see how it would function in a structural progression. But then I started to consider, what if the theme isn’t static? What if our understanding of the nature of things changes in the course of the story?

Reexamining the great films I had been studying, I asked the questions, “What is the nature of the world we are in at the beginning of the story?” and, “What is the nature of this world at the end?” And the films did not disappoint. Over and over, I found a thematic point B presenting a new understanding of human nature, society or the world, in contrast to a point A that exists at the beginning.

I like to cite Fargo as perhaps one of the purest examples I’ve found of a theme-driven film. It begins in a world in which a Hardy Boys-style kidnapping caper seems harmless enough to pull off with no one getting hurt, and then gradually progresses to a world of insatiable greed, psychopathic murder and gratuitous dismemberment. When it came out in 1996, Fargo’s contained world presented an apt metaphor for what had become of our society, and, therefore, resonated deeply with both critics and viewers. So, for this film, it is in the metaphoric meaning (a.k.a., the theme) that we find the strongest A to B progression.

While pure plot will tell a story with little meaning beyond the sensational events on screen and character will add some insight into human nature to the thrills and chills, putting the two together to create a metaphor brings the potential for the concrete embodiment of larger ideas. Character is not simply decoration on the plot with theme floating around abstractly somewhere above. Rather, each exists as its own entity in balance with the other two.

However, whereas generic models for plot or character structures can be mapped out with numbered lists, no system has yet emerged to describe a generic theme structure. The good news is that, therefore, the possibilities are endless. In my own studies of great films, each theme structure shows up as its own unique system peculiar to that particular story.

How do these theme structures get created? On occasion an artist may consciously come up with a theme progression. But far more often the artist is gripped with an inspired idea, endeavors laboriously to manifest it in a coherent form and then stands back to look at what they’ve just created. What happens next likely falls somewhere on a spectrum in which, at one end, the artist is surprised to find whole other layers of meaning that they didn’t consciously include; or, at the other end of the spectrum, the artist is no longer able to find their original inspired idea in the confused mess they have brought into being. Where the work falls on this spectrum is completely dependent upon the artist’s ability to engage not only their conscious effort but also the unconscious instinct they have developed from ongoing study of the masterful works that have preceded them.